Revealing Carl's Character (p25)

Like page 24, expect an update on this one soon.

Revealing Ben's Character (p24)

I'm still trying to decide on the rendering style for the in-game illustrations...this will be updated shortly.

Character Generation Details (Part 3) (p23)

Character Generation Details (Part 2) (p22)

Character Generation Details (Part 1) (p21)

Tools of the Story (p20)

At this stage, the page numbers are keeping ahead of the days of the year (Day 18 - Page 20), if I can keep this rate up, the explanatory comic should be finished before the middle of the year. I hope it can be finished before then, but we'll have to wait and see.

Establishing the Outlines (Part 2) (p19)

Establishing the Outlines (part 1) (p18)

Starting Character Generation (p17)

There feels like I need to do more on this page, so it's subject to change over the next couple of days/weeks as a few more pages fall into place. A few people have been commenting around the notion of "show, don't tell"...by this I mean that there should be less descriptive elements of text, and more images or discussion between characters. Personally I'm aiming for a balance, and there will be some pages with a lot of images as well as quite a few "speech-heavy" pages.